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Saturday, December 15, 2012
Commentary on Welcome to Shikon High Chap. 1 by XxSmexiiXx
Welcome to Shikon High
Summary: Shiori got transferred to Shikon High which is a school for
Preistess, demon slayers,Hanyou,youkai,angels,devils and monks.Will love awaits
them or be heartbroken? Shiori is not the bat demon! It is my character... done
and updated! original link
Note:
Rating:
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Umm...What just happened?
Terrible spellng, Terrible grammar, Rambling, WTF?
And now, on with the terrible...
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Enjoy |
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Shiori:
Hey im gonna be Kagome, rin, ayame and Sango's bff
Inuyasha:
Feh...
Shiori:
Now on with the story!
"
Hey hurry up or we are going to be late!"I shouted.
"
Okay! Okay!" Shin said.
"
Alright!" Hins said.
Well...
Hi im Shiori Hakashi and im an angel my bros are a half angel. (And you’re just cool with that, huh?)
That's Shin he has silver eyes and red hair, that's hins
he
has blue hair and silver eyes and this is me i have lilac hair with silver
eyes. (Are we supposed to be looking at
pictures or something?) We're on our way to shikon high (No really? I mean it is the title of the
story) im an Eighth grader my bros are 6th grader (If you’re 6th and 8th graders then why are you
going to high school?)
Well
im new there we transferred there because ou family moved nearer to Shikon high
so we transferred ... (You transferred.
We get it.)We reached already
"
Hey sis..." Hins said.
"
I didn't know our school was so..." Shin said.
"
FREAKING AWESOME!" I said. (Just
no…)
We
looked at each other and laughed. (-at
our collective stupidity)
"
Okay lets get to the office and get our Schedule."I said.
The
office...
"
Okay sis we got our Schedule (That was
fast.) and me and bro has every
single same periods!" Hins said.
"
That's great now to your classes" I said shooing them off.
"
Hey are you new here?" A girl said. (There
is no explaination in this story.)
"
Yep!" I replied.
"
Well i will guide you! My name is Sango!" Sango said. (I can’t even…)
"
My name is Shiori!" I replied.
"
Can you let me see your Schedule?" Sango asked. (I see a pattern here.)
"
Sure.." i said. (But would she?)
"
Hey you have all the same classes with me! Cool!" Sango said.
"
OMG! Come on lets get to English class!' I said. (Ugh! What’s with all this ___ said this and ___ said that!? This is
less story and more random dialogue.)
We
walked to class with a big smile plastered on my face.
When
we reached class. We saw a group of boys who looked like jerks pushing their
way through.
"
Sango who are they?" Shiori asked. (Third
person all of a sudden…)
"
Oh yea.. let me tell you about this school.. Well that is Miroku" Sango
said with sparkles in her eyes ,she pointed at a brown haired boy
that
tied his hair in a low ponytail.
Well
that's all i have (YAY!) no time i
gtg review plz!
Labels: badfic, Welcome to Shikon High
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Saturday, December 15, 2012
Commentary on Welcome to Shikon High Chap. 1 by XxSmexiiXx
Welcome to Shikon High
Summary: Shiori got transferred to Shikon High which is a school for
Preistess, demon slayers,Hanyou,youkai,angels,devils and monks.Will love awaits
them or be heartbroken? Shiori is not the bat demon! It is my character... done
and updated! original link
Note:
Rating:
|
Umm...What just happened?
Terrible spellng, Terrible grammar, Rambling, WTF?
And now, on with the terrible...
|
Enjoy |
|
Shiori:
Hey im gonna be Kagome, rin, ayame and Sango's bff
Inuyasha:
Feh...
Shiori:
Now on with the story!
"
Hey hurry up or we are going to be late!"I shouted.
"
Okay! Okay!" Shin said.
"
Alright!" Hins said.
Well...
Hi im Shiori Hakashi and im an angel my bros are a half angel. (And you’re just cool with that, huh?)
That's Shin he has silver eyes and red hair, that's hins
he
has blue hair and silver eyes and this is me i have lilac hair with silver
eyes. (Are we supposed to be looking at
pictures or something?) We're on our way to shikon high (No really? I mean it is the title of the
story) im an Eighth grader my bros are 6th grader (If you’re 6th and 8th graders then why are you
going to high school?)
Well
im new there we transferred there because ou family moved nearer to Shikon high
so we transferred ... (You transferred.
We get it.)We reached already
"
Hey sis..." Hins said.
"
I didn't know our school was so..." Shin said.
"
FREAKING AWESOME!" I said. (Just
no…)
We
looked at each other and laughed. (-at
our collective stupidity)
"
Okay lets get to the office and get our Schedule."I said.
The
office...
"
Okay sis we got our Schedule (That was
fast.) and me and bro has every
single same periods!" Hins said.
"
That's great now to your classes" I said shooing them off.
"
Hey are you new here?" A girl said. (There
is no explaination in this story.)
"
Yep!" I replied.
"
Well i will guide you! My name is Sango!" Sango said. (I can’t even…)
"
My name is Shiori!" I replied.
"
Can you let me see your Schedule?" Sango asked. (I see a pattern here.)
"
Sure.." i said. (But would she?)
"
Hey you have all the same classes with me! Cool!" Sango said.
"
OMG! Come on lets get to English class!' I said. (Ugh! What’s with all this ___ said this and ___ said that!? This is
less story and more random dialogue.)
We
walked to class with a big smile plastered on my face.
When
we reached class. We saw a group of boys who looked like jerks pushing their
way through.
"
Sango who are they?" Shiori asked. (Third
person all of a sudden…)
"
Oh yea.. let me tell you about this school.. Well that is Miroku" Sango
said with sparkles in her eyes ,she pointed at a brown haired boy
that
tied his hair in a low ponytail.
Well
that's all i have (YAY!) no time i
gtg review plz!
Labels: badfic, Welcome to Shikon High
0 Comments
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