Commentary on Welcome to Shikon High Chap. 3 by XxSmexiiXx
Welcome to Shikon High Chap. 3
Summary: Shiori got transferred to Shikon High which is a school for
Preistess, demon slayers,Hanyou,youkai,angels,devils and monks.Will love awaits
them or be heartbroken? Shiori is not the bat demon! It is my character... done
and updated!
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Note: Chapter 3. I can't believe my brain hasn't exploded yet.Though now I think I've gotten used to the sheer stupidity of this story. Now it's just funny. Insanly funny.
Rating:
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LOLWUT?
And now, on with the stupid...
Enjoy |
Shiori:
I feel like eatin' cookies...
Inuyasha:
fatass
Shiori:
Andrew!
Andrew:
Go entertain ur gf Kagome not Shiori
Kagome:
Why don't u entertain ur gf Shiori?!
Shiori:
- blushes- now on with the story! (Please
for the sake of all that is good in the world, stop trying to be funny!)
(Do we really need a recap?)
Charmaine
lunged her fist at her but Shiori stopped her hand and twist it and pushed her
down the table.
"
Don't try cuz i know how to fight real bad" Shiori said.
"
Andrew hun u saw her.." charmaine said, faking tears.
"
Eww... go somewhere else u know i don't like u..." Andrew said.
"
Woot! Way to go fuck u bitch!" Shiori said.
"
Ugh! I swear to make ur life a living hell!" charmaine said. (Looks to be the other way around.)
"
what r u gonna do? Making my life a living hell starts by letting me see ur
fucking ugly troll face?" shiori said. (What is wrong with this girl?!)
"
hmph!" Charmaine said.
They
left and Rin, ayame and kagome stood there shocked. Sango was the one smiling
like crazy.
"
Woot! u go girl!" Ayame said. (Yeah way to fight bitchiness, with uber
bitchiness!)
Then,
miroku came up to shiori and start his perveted ways. (Oh, that Miroku…tsk tsk)
"
Will u consider baring my children?" Miroku asked.
Then
shiori felt a hand on her butt.
"
HENTAI!" Shiori said. (Oh God,
random Japanese words too?! THIS IS A GEM! It’s like Christmas!)
Miroku
had a slap mark on his face and he was also unconsious.
"
Whoa girl! Can u teach me how to do that?" Sango asked. (Is it really so difficult to slap people?)
"
sure!" Shiori said.
"
NO!" Miroku said as he sprang foward.
"
Hey girl what r u doing in this type of school?" Miroku asked.
"
Im an angel.. and lemme guess ur a perverted monk..." shiori said.
everyone
burst out laughing. (Why?)
"
Im not perverted... and u r definitely a beauty on the first day of
school" Miroku said. (But not any
other day.)
"
thnx i guess?" Shiori said.
The
group may have not noticed that Andrew kept looking at Shiori only Sango did. (And da plot thickens…)
"
Hey Andrew!" sango said.
Shiori:
im rlly tough in school..
Andrew:
well she is also tough outside
Sango:
review plz or she wont make anymore fanfics (Stop threatening me!)
Shiori:
im rlly so so so so so sorry it is very short but i have to sleep already baii!
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